Bouncing Story Episode 3

Comments from Canada

From a writing stand point, not much was added to the story. You simply stated who we were, but that you were still in trouble, you didn't introduce new characters or truly further the story.
From the production side, I heard more clarity through the mastering of this piece, although there still was not a lot of production. The voices were well processed, but other than that there wasn't much else other than ambient noises and phones ringing.


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